Wednesday, 27 September 2017
Pick a Path Story
W.A.L.T... Use appropriate language features for a pick a path story.
This week, our class was to make a pick a path story using google forms. I really enjoyed making this.
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Hi Hingano! It's Telesia! I am a year 6 student from St Bernadette's Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI like the situations you have chosen to make this google form e.g the friends asking if you wanted to smoke. Next time, make the option of doing the wrong choice available but make the consequence to come with it. You should also go back and check for mistakes because in the situation of the tattoos, it says I was 'suprosed'.
I am looking forward to seeing your next post!
Hi Hingano, my name is Alex and I am a Year 6 student from St. Bernadette's School. I liked how there were good choices in your pick a path story because it teaches us to do the right thing. Next time maybe you could do more appropriate pages. In your WALT it says 'Use appropriate language features for a pick a path story' and I don't think cigarettes are appropriate for school. Also you could link the pages because in the tattoo section I couldn't do the right choice because the page wasn't linked to the next page. I look forward to seeing more work from you Hingano.
ReplyDeleteHi Hingano,I really liked your pick a part story because you had a lot of good choices to pick.But i didn't know which on to pick but i just picked the ones that had the word 'no'in it.
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