My Mother’s Love

In Room 6, we have been learning about Ballad's. Our task was to make our own Ballad's about anything but you have to tell a story. My poem is about my mother and how much she loves me. What I found hard was trying to make my sentences rhyme. What I found easy was coming up with the rhythm, my rhythm is A B A A B.  Something I could add is more language features.

My mother always seems to know whats wrong

Before I even have to tell her

My love for her is really strong

Her voice is soft like a song

Me and her together forever

She comforts me with her love when I am feeling down

And she'd try her best to make me smile

When I see her sad, it makes me frown

So I flip her frown around

And make her feel better and well

My mother had to do it all on her own

With no one to help her with the hard work

I felt sad for my mum she was all alone

It was just her to see me reach my huge milestone

But it didn't bother her, with my help we used teamwork

My mother’s one wish is for me to be successful

I will try my hardest to make that wish come true and to

make my mother proud of me

This wish is very stressful

But also my mother’s wish is very special

Because without her love I don’t know where I’d be

I don't know how I could ever repay my mother's love

she has given to me and my siblings

All I could give her is my respect

Even when my mum had nothing she kept trying

And I thank her for being there from the beginning

All the special memories I have with her, I will cherish and collect