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I really enjoyed writing about my holidays. Maybe next time I could come up with descriptive words.
HOLIDAYS
On the first day of day of the school holidays me, my cousin and my sister went to my dad's house. My dad didn’t know that we were going to his house, we wanted to surprise him. On our way my older sister said for us to buy some food for our dad to eat, so we brought KFC. When we got there we surprised him and he was happy to see me.
The next day, my dad called in sick, he wasn’t really sick he just wanted to spend some quality time with us. We went to heaps of places and to me this was the BEST day ever. First we went to Timezone then we went to do some food shopping (and we brought some snacks). Next we went to Mcdonald's and bought some frozen cokes because my dad told us we were going to go to the big park in town with our little cousins. It was fun playing at the big park especially with my whole family.
Seeing my dad after all these years was a big relief of pain. I was happy but sad at the same time, happy that I finally saw my dad and sad because I have to come back home to my mum and leave him all by himself.I am really happy that I am still in contact with my dad.
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