Last week Friday, We were told to write a story about Goldilocks but we have to take it in our own ways e.g instead of Goldilocks you can have Smelly-locks you know like be creative. That was our task. I really enjoyed this task.
Gangster-locks
Wass up my name is Brittany, but everyone calls me Gangster-locks cause I don’t really like my name…..it’s too GIRLY. Also I’m 16 years old. I am known for the world’s greatest burglar. Let’s get on with this story if that’s how writers start their stories but who
cares…..probably my teacher….oh who cares.
So I was coming from the bank and no, I wasn’t getting money out from my mums card to buy some cigarettes, I was holding the bank up. Then I headed to the South East Forest, I ran as fast as I could because the police was on my leash and South East Forest was the only location I knew I could lose them. After losing the cops I just realised that I was LOST!!!!
After 3 days..(3 days I know right) of being lost in a forest I was hungry, I was sad and I needed to rob a Rich Mansion. Suddenly BOOM!!!! A Rich Mansion my prayers had been answered.Then I thought to myself should carry on what I have been doing for these past 16 years or should I be the good guy……TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!
So that was the end of my story
Good-bye for Now
Rob ya later
hello Hingano I really love how you have just wrote some pretty gangster writing and I love how when you are worried or yelling you make the words big.
ReplyDeleteHi Hingano,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story gangsta locks. I really liked how you put at the end 'Rob ya later". Maybe next time you could try put more detail into it,but other then that it was amazing.
Hi Hingano,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about Gangster-locks. Maybe next time you could make the reader read more about you story. You have done really well in writing this it makes me want to read more.
Hi Hingano,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story gangsta locks Also I liked how you put 'Rob ya later"at the end.