W.A.L.T.... use show not tell.
In Writing, our task was to create a paragraph about times we have or would experience different types of feelings using show and not tell. Can you guess what my feelings are ?
I enjoyed writing about show not tell because it makes the reader think about what you are writing about. What I found hard was to make sure I wasn't telling the reader about what I'm implying to. Maybe next time, I'd use some figurative language.
As I walked passed the gates, sweat dripped through my new blazer, frustration was gliding itself through my body. My heart thumped so hard, my head thumped twice as fast. I had been waiting for this moment since year 7 but now I’m wanting to go back. Just as I took a glimpse of the new building, I saw friends from school. Sweat became tears of joy, frustration lowered and happiness had appeared and my heart had gone back to beating normal.
